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August 10, 2007 EDIT
Ok, it's just finishing up its third or fourth revision and most importantly, this part of the story is complete. Anyone interested in reading it? I'd appreciate one last bit of feedback before I tuck it away during school and work on the next part.

Shoot me an email at Kakichi_516@hotmail.com and I'll get you a copy by the end of this weekend. Thanks in advance and enjoy!
Story info: Fantasy; approx 12000 words;

[This message has been edited by Kakichi (edited August 10, 2007).]