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it's a driving hard rock tune, we are trying to make it more universal.
Your mission: come up with one new word for both blanks.
"10 years gone by still on the run thanks for the memories, so much fun we fly sideways on a straight path headed nowhere, really ________ fast _______ fast, we fly farther"
already discarded entries=
really f*&^%ing fast (the original) really really fast really goddamn fast really freakin' fast
Honestly, anything you put in there, it seems like a pretty flat lyric. You may want to change more than just the one word. And without the rest of the song it'll be difficult to insert a word matching the context of your little ballad there.
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I like "really ripping fast, time blows past, we fly farther" although I question ending a line with "We fly farther." "Farther we fly" sounds a lot better to my ear.
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