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stupid first lines...
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kinglear
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First 13 of Short story
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grendelkahn
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One opening....two big questions
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Christine
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13 from ccwbass
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ccwbass
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Sister of Deceit
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Phanto
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my first post here....
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rogozhin
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Third Beginning
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Gizzmo0411
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Brainstorm help please :)
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RillSoji
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The force of Death
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Phanto
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Classroom Opening
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Gizzmo0411
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Beach Story
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Gizzmo0411
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The BlackWood
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Wafna
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ccwbass: One More Shot at 13
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ccwbass
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Critiquers Wanted...Inquire Within
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cvgurau
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Quante start attempt 9?
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Fahrion Kryptov
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13
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marius
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"Please" Is My "Screw You"
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Agaranthakil
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Looking for the Right Track
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Lilamrta
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I try again, from earlier in the story
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dbzff_more
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The Possibly Bad Beginning
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Gen
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Fragments and Feedback
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Christine
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Poppy
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Nick Vend
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I have put this off too long
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PE_Sharp
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a fantasy novel that makes a good frame
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J. H. Sorensen
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Good or Bad Opening?
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RillSoji
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Hey everybody! this is a formal invitiation to critique all my story or 13 lines!
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J. H. Sorensen
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does this set the scene well enough?
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rjzeller
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How does this sound
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dbzff_more
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New member, not so new writer
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mogservant
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My Virgin 13
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TruHero
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Unnecessary first paragraph?
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glogpro
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a horrible sentence needs fixin'
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wetwilly
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here we go
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TheoPhileo
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squirrels
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stevenrushing
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I'm not happy!
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Gwalchmai
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"October"
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rjzeller
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Beginning of Chapter One, first draft
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Lilamrta
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Does this intro work for you?
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rjzeller
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Story beginning for feedback
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Enten-Eller
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13 sci-fi lines
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ccwbass
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