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Bash the new one...
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Phanto
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Is this passive?
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Christine
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Short story frag...unedited
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yanos
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I'll give it a whirl...
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loggrad98
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Start of story for critique
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daMutt
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first thirteen lines for critique
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Oliver
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bash the new boy!
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sadbadger
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7
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Sidaharra (reworked, new POV)
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Ratlance
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Beginnings
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Wafna
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Quick PoV Query
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Phanto
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Sidaharra (comments please)
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Ratlance
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Some silly lines
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ccwbass
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short story (or chapter 1?) 13 lines
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HiJolly
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First 13 lines for critique, please...
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JBShearer
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Creating A Masterpiece, One Rhyme at a Time
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cvgurau
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ccwbass thinks he's got his 13 lines
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ccwbass
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First 13 lines of 2004
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somnambulous
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ccwbass - excerpt for critique
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ccwbass
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Poetry ??
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TGRedBaron
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Excerpt for critique
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JBShearer
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Fantasy
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Phanto
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Critique please
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moxcamel
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Betrayal
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Christine
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Death Unnoticed
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glogpro
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This story is huge...
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Bansuki
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2
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Story beginnings
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Louis Wu
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13
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Critque requested
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Able2man
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3
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Lol sorry kathleen/ Poetry has been Killed
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BudHAHA
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Sci-fi story
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Louis Wu
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1
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"human"
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Christine
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RE: Copyright protection for story ideas presented for critique and Feedback?
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marcusunlimited
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Story Idea -- Help Please
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Enten-Eller
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Intro critique requested
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Gwalchmai
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Feedback for a novel in progress
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SiliGurl
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3
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Two versions of a scene
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Jules
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Evocation of Butterflies
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GZ
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Sci/Satire Short Story
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Phanto
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3
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Blue/Green: Slaves to Love
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Damascus
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1
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identity and being
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glogpro
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"Paint, Blood, and Ashes" -- Crit Request
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Rahl22
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