All the votes and crits are finally in. Everyone kept their commitments :-)Here, from the list on the fridge, are the stories, their numbers and their authors:
1 Unwritten "The Cabin"
2 would be "Ansible Time Zone"
3 Annepin "Spin Cycle"
4 IB "Rebirth"
5 kathyton "Special Delivery"
6 snapper "The Centenarian"
7 TaleSpinner "Vauum Sucks"
8 Shimiqua "And This is Life Eternal"
9 would be "The Red Ansible"
10 Grant John "Thirty-five Dollars"
11 Cheyne "Listen"
For the first 13s, in third place was ... drum roll ...
Excuse me, the ansible's ringing in the kitchen.
"Who won?" asked the Voice from Afar.
"I'm just telling everyone. You're interrupting."
"So get on with it then."
"But ... oh, never mind ..."
In third place for the first 13s was ... drum roll ...
Thirty-five dollars, by Grant John
And in second place was ... bigger drum roll ...
And This is Life Eternal, by Shimiqua
But in first place for first 13s, with over twice as many points as its nearest rivals was ... huge drum roll ...
quote:
Best first 13: Spin Cycle, by Annepin
"Do you think she'll glom if I ping her again?" asked the Voice from Afar.
"Shudup," I said. "You're messing up the ceremony. And what was all that nonsense you were telling snapper about time working differently on your plane?"
The Voice from Afar chuckled. "That wasn't me he was talking to. It was my alter-ego--the Voice from Another Far. But why are you nattering about history? Who won the contest?"
Okay. Four stories were grouped close together at the top, just ahead of the pack.
In fourth place was ... drum roll ...
The Centenarian, by snapper
In third place was ... drum roll and trumpet fanfare ...
Spin Cycle, by Annepin
In second place was ... drum roll, trumpet fanfare, ansibles ringing ...
Listen, by Cheyne
And in First Place ... Was ... drum roll, trumpet fanfare, ansibles ringing and guns blazing ...
quote:
Best story: The Cabin, by Unwritten
And of course, with a little work, all the stories will be winners :-)
Congrats to Annepin and Unwritten, and to everyone for some great work.
Thanks y'all for a super contest, for some valuable crits, and for making my life easy by observing the rules.
If you owe more crits (some people did their eight, some just the top three) please send them direct to their authors.
Everyone got at least three crits. I have e-mailed the whole package of crits to everyone in the contest. It's a small, 78Kb zip file, and if you can't deal with it, e-mail me. (On most computers you should be detach the file from the e-mail, right click it and unpack it into a bunch of text and Word files. Therein you'll find the crits. Some of the votes were sent separately, so if you want to see the full voting spreadsheet, e-mail me.)
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"You promised IB an anisble. You broke your promise," said the Voice from Afar.
"I promised him an ansible when they're invented," I said.
"And you're speaking to me on?"
I looked at the ansible, sleek, smooth and sexy in my hand.
"Give it to him," said the Voice from Afar and hung up.
Before I could protest the double-entendre, the ansible began to fade, back into my imagination.
Sorry, IB.
[This message has been edited by TaleSpinner (edited July 19, 2008).]