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theworldinthewords
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I'm a freelance writer/director and recently a friend's comedy group asked me to direct two of their web sketches on a super-low budget. Unfortunately, I didn't get any say in the writing, but I think they both turned out pretty well.

Also, the latter sketch features Lauren Lapkus who has a regular role on NBC's new sit-com "Are You There, Vodka? It's me, Chelsea" which is airing this year.

http://youtu.be/bOj5UK-Q4yI?hd=1

http://youtu.be/3uad9jusxPI?hd=1

Let me know what you think and please share if you like them!

Best,
Kristopher


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The first one looks like a commericial for nintendo. The second one was just plain odd.

I did like how they were shot, so an A for your part.


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The first was quite funny but the second was hilarious. It reminded me of the over the top violence in Scary Movie (which, oddly enough, I watched last night).

I especially liked the manic looking blonde girl with the big eyes, scraping her knives together.

Well done mate, they were good.

[This message has been edited by pdblake (edited September 11, 2011).]


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The directing was fine; I didn't think about it while watching, which is a good sign. However, I'd rather not have watched either film. To me, they are too disturbing to be funny.
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