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This is from one of the first flash challenges at Liberty Hall. I'm not sure if I just want to revise it or if I want to do more with it.
Right now I'm looking for any feedback, critiques, or brainstorming ideas that anyone has time to offer.
Thanks guys
----------------- Title: Switch! Word Count: 501 Genre: Sci-fi -----------------
They say a child doesn’t start making coherent memories until after age of three or four, but that isn’t always true. At least, I don’t think it is.
For me, it seems as though I have always had memories. I remember sitting in my crib, playing with my stuffed animals; and standing in front of the oven, watching mom’s chocolate chip cookies bake. I remember learning to walk and talk -- struggling to feel coordinated. I remember...
It’s just that now, I’m not so sure those memories are mine. In fact, I’m not so sure any of my memories are mine.
[This message has been edited by Robyn_Hood (edited September 19, 2005).]
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Thanks, Will. Actually, I already have it posted in my PSC forum. I can PM it to you or you can comment in the topic if you prefer.
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I don't have time to read it myself, but I just wanted to say I can't spot anything to crit in the opener. Really good stuff, and a sweet last line.
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