Congratulations! I enjoyed it very much. You did an excellent job of slipping in details to set the scene and mood, and I really like your style.
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@Wordcaster: It's interesting that you mention the title (which isn't the original); the present title was chosen by the publisher, taken from the dialogue in the story. It's funny that it became the title, since when I submitted to American publishers I actually removed that line.
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