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First thirteen lines... Crier
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Ellepepper
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13
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Fantasy: Death and the Boy
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Sara Genge
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8
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Quantum Jitters (Working Title)
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Zoot
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10
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Ghost Story
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RMatthewWare
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First 13 lines of a Short Story
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priscillabgoo
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Parallel Universe Short Story
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BruceWayne1
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7
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To gain the world (Sci-fi)
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Donelle
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7
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No more novels in this area
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Kathleen Dalton Woodbury
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Somniloquy; Based on a true story. (Sci-fi/fantasy)
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Donelle
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3900 words. Monster Fantasy
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Sara Genge
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13
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A weird way to start (Slightly Sci-fi, currently 4400 words)
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Ash
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8
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In Between Dreams
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Grijalva
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8
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Novella, revised
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Green_Writer
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9
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Short story - first 13
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Jesse D
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19
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Short story
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trailmix
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A twist on your hero
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tigertinite
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NuMessia Complex - First 13 lines
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conradbrean
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latest attempt, please let me know what u think
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Max Masterson
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CARE - short story
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erpagris
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The Chocolate Maker's Daughter
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cll
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Magic & Steel (2000 +, Fantasy)
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TMan1969
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revised first 13, any better?
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Max Masterson
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Soulcaster V2.0
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trailmix
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5
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"Between the Lines"--3500 words, fantasy
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thexmedic
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first 13 of a fantasy, would love feedback
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Max Masterson
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The Fire of Life
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eclectic skeptic
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First 13 of an SF short story, no title.
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thayerds
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5
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"The Gravity Engine" sci-fantasy, 13 rewrite
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xardoz
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Shield Mage WIP 13
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RillSoji
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Fantasy 2400 words. 2nd person POV. Adult content
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Sara Genge
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13
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The Grind
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thecox
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fantasy, no title yet
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Megan
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Far Future try again
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BruceWayne1
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another hook??????
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I am destiny
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Going Basic, Fiction, 1900 and growing
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TMan1969
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First 13 lines - Untitled fantasy novel
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Terloch
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Hook For Novel
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whyfo?
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13 lines revised.....
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I am destiny
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14
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Novella
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Green_Writer
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far future
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BruceWayne1
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